Ongaku o Kiku

I'm back, senpai !<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/w/o/w…" alt="" title="woohooplz" />
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-hmm hmm hmm hmm..... What to say? what to say?

-Well, this one's much better than the last one of yours that got my critique.(bad English). You drew the back ground very well and very detailed. Also, your shading is HORRIBLY WONDERFUL!!!!!!! I see fewer shading lines, which made the pics more realistic. Plus, i really like the stripes on her clothes. I'd never have enough patient to draw them. <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/defau…" alt="" title="OnionPlz" />

-Unlike your last pics i criticized, her arm now is quite small, or her head is a bit big (if you compare those two). Unless it's your style. You don't have to blend color so much on the bed. It'll be a little unrealistic. The line below her eye, it's like it has been broken away? (still dunno how to say it). Her right elbow is too pointy, making it quite impossible. And the most thing that distracted me all the time, that is her left hand: I don't see her pinkie finger! Or at least a part of it. <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/i/m…" alt="" title="mingplz" />

-Hmm, that's all i can say. Your pics are still as outstanding as always. I really hope that i can learn many things from you. You officially are my favorite artist from now on! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

p/s: nếu được thì anh làm cho con mèo lông lá hơn tí. E khoái mèo lông xù anh ạ <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Anh không cần để ý cái khoản đường mắt dưới bị đứt rời lắm đâu. Nó giống như nét đặc trưng vậy. <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/k/a/k…" alt="" title="kakashithumbsupplz" />