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Yumeno Tomoe by HaiHoVoThan Yumeno Tomoe by HaiHoVoThan
Ruu...

My mascot design for my friend's page Otaku News on Facebook...

7 hours with Paint Tool SAI
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Chào buổi tối Senpai ~
Vì sắp phải đi ngủ (1h rưỡi sáng rồi) nên em crit ngắn gọn hàm xúc dễ hiểu thôi nhé ~
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It's slashing time :iconcomeoverhereplz:
-Overall, it's wonderfully done ~ The anatomy is fine, plus her face is quite cute, and a bit childish (i like that :iconmanlysmileplz:). Also the shading is perfect and very detailed.
-Now that was my opinion until i zoomed in ~ Let's see ~ If you looked carefully, you would notice that her right arm hadn't fit the body ~ The shading part under her face, yep, the neck part, the skin color there looked brighter than her overral skin color ~ Her fingers are also a bit pointy (unless that was intentionally drown by you) ~~~~~~
Well, that's all for today, cuz i have to go to sleep now. Your pics it's still as beautiful as always ~ Looking forward to your next pics ~
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sorry double posting == i thought i was posting in critics :iconarigatouplz:

that chara really cute :icononionxdplz: especially her clothes i like it! i've never seen anywhere,
btw ain't commentary about the shading, or anatomy, eyes or something (that is nothing to do about style isn't it?)

The hair is like mirai suenaga i guess, mm.. perhepas fixing or changing is better it'll make more originality about your works, but everything depend on you :3 except you interpreted it different and still used it as a mascot of japanese or otaku.

sorry if i was rude~
don't kill me, hehe
:iconcomeoverhereplz:

good luck with your work
:icongreatjobplz:
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Blue-marin Featured By Owner 16 hours ago
Foxy loves 
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Inori-Yuzuriha1 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student General Artist
WOW she's amazing, i LOVE her hair!!!!!! x
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Imass21 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
reminds me of a certain eye style I was trying to pursue a few months ago.
Didnt work out too well for me though lol
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8bitcyclone Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2013
nice ^^
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gunz159 Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that chara really cute :icononionxdplz: especially her clothes i like it! i've never seen anywhere,
btw ain't commentary about the shading, or anatomy, eyes or something (that is nothing to do about style isn't it?)

The hair is like mirai suenaga i guess, mm.. perhepas fixing or changing is better it'll make more originality about your works, but everything depend on you :3 except you interpreted it different and still used it as a mascot of japanese or otaku.

sorry if i was rude~
don't kill me, hehe
:iconcomeoverhereplz:

good luck with your work
:icongreatjobplz:
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HaiHoVoThan Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Ruu...

I've seen your critique, thank you... =D
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gunz159 Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sorry double post,
kinda confusing after long time not login :iconrelievedplz:
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llrb Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i can see Kantoku's influence! soooo cute :iconyushplz:
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PeterRollar Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing work. You know how to do this kinda stuff. :clap:
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DeadwoodKimono Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013
Pretty
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