This is a fine piece of work, I'd just like to see a little bit more sparkle in the eye, a little more feeling to this character. You are totally going in the right direction, I just think a fancy outfit would be nice and a sparkle that really pops out from the picture. Now, a lot of manga artists get discouraged when tackling the body, but this was a very good piece of artwork that you didn't let go to your head. She looks confident, but shy in a cute way. I looks like she just found the love of her life. The emotion is crucial, but overall, this is a picture I would pay to have. Great job my friend!
Ehe, anh không để crit thôi thì em làm 1 bài ngay và luôn tại đây vậy ~ *E hèm* Viết tiếng Anh cho mọi người đọc ~ --------------------------------------------------- WOOHOO ~ CLANNAD Fan art !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Although she's my second favourite character (first is Tomoyo) but she's still a adorable character ~ With her dictionary ~ -Your anatomy is fine ~ The coloring is perfectly done and so is the shading. About the lining, i must say her face is a bit fat though. And her chin is pointy ~
- Guess i don't have to say this cuz you've already know ~ Her hand. I wonder how can her forefinger is smaller than her pinky finger. Her left thumb is pointy ~ Her breasts also looked a bit off ~
- Hehe, i like the dress's shading ~ Very creative ~ It's looked like crystal or sort of ~ The two pockets should be drawn higher i guess.
Hehe, that's all ~ I don't wanna have any compliment about this ~ Cuz i'm VERY bad at literature ~ If you say you'll gonna have more of Clannad fan arts, i'm looking forward to it Draw Tomoyo pls Ehehe, kawaii desu ne~