This is a fine piece of work, I'd just like to see a little bit more sparkle in the eye, a little more feeling to this character. You are totally going in the right direction, I just think a fancy outfit would be nice and a sparkle that really pops out from the picture. Now, a lot of manga artists get discouraged when tackling the body, but this was a very good piece of artwork that you didn't let go to your head. She looks confident, but shy in a cute way. I looks like she just found the love of her life. The emotion is crucial, but overall, this is a picture I would pay to have. Great job my friend!