Aozora

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OK, first: why is this drawing a bit off if compared with your other drawings?? I'll go further more into the details:

- Her face is alright, but i'm wondering about her eyes's black dot's position. It's maybe some kind of drawing style, but i think it's not very suit the painting. <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/d/e/d…" alt="" title="deathstareplz" />

- About her hair. Your shading on the hair can tell me that her hair is wet. That's amazing. But you should make the lower part of the hair "wet" too. The lines is quite straight and looks like it has been broken or something...

- Her hand. Exactly her left hand. Too small and not very detailed

- It seems that your background is not very perfect, especially the water. You should get rid of the black lines, doing that will make the painting more realistic. The cloud are wonderful, nothing to complain <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/h/t…" alt="" title="thumbsupplz" /> And like Kaho-senpai said before. Add some sunlight to make the pics brighter.
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Haizz, bức này chất lượng kém hơn mấy bức kia thì phải. Có vẻ như anh đầu tư chưa đều cả về cô gái lẫn background lắm. Lần sau cố gắng anh nhé.để thằng em này học hỏi chứ