You're getting better and better at drawing and coloring the character especially the hair parts which show your improvement. However: + Eyes: keep the "black dot" in the center of the eyes, dont move it away, cuz when you go with Kantoku style, you have to do it like Kantoku did as much as you can +Breast: too much dark tone in the left side, remove 1/2 or 2/3 it will be better I really surprised about your first time doing BG like this, which can show your efforts to draw water, cloud and sky, not bad at all but you need to reference more to define water and cloud's color structure. And Finally, I suggest that you add some of light part on the sky to make the sun will make your pic brighter and better. Congraz
This is really good. The shading is really good The background is epic The anatomy and pose are as probably as good as anyone could get. The emotion gets a long really well with the pose.
What is bugging me is how the background stands out kind of more than the character herself. But Other than that I love it. Also the hair is really good, and it takes a whole lot of time to be able to do this and a lot of patients, which is what makes an artist really talanted with their art.
phần sky mày làm đẹp hơn tao rồi nhưng nước lại không như tao mong đợi, trong giả quá, gần giống xà phòng hơn, với lại lần sau vẽ nước thì đừng có line da mấy chỗ bóng mày làm sậm quá, với lại tóc tô chưa kín kìa