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Ruu...

Over 15 hours with Paint Tool SAI
Random OC
Try to do some BG...
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:iconkahookashii:
You're getting better and better at drawing and coloring the character especially the hair parts which show your improvement. However:
+ Eyes: keep the "black dot" in the center of the eyes, dont move it away, cuz when you go with Kantoku style, you have to do it like Kantoku did as much as you can
+Breast: too much dark tone in the left side, remove 1/2 or 2/3 it will be better
I really surprised about your first time doing BG like this, which can show your efforts to draw water, cloud and sky, not bad at all but you need to reference more to define water and cloud's color structure. And Finally, I suggest that you add some of light part on the sky to make the sun will make your pic brighter and better.
Congraz

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:iconepic-sauce1:
This is really good.
The shading is really good
The background is epic
The anatomy and pose are as probably as good as anyone could get.
The emotion gets a long really well with the pose.

What is bugging me is how the background stands out kind of more than the character herself. But Other than that I love it.
Also the hair is really good, and it takes a whole lot of time to be able to do this and a lot of patients, which is what makes an artist really talanted with their art.

Hope I helped,
Epic-Sauce1
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:iconalexskulluterna:
AlexSkullUterna Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014
nice
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:icongraycomputer:
GrayComputer Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
this is awesome!
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:iconashirokei:
AshiroKei Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing Clap
:happybounce: Heart
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:iconstudiogdm:
studiogdm Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
cool!
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:iconmaxend1994:
maxend1994 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Student General Artist
**) it's so cute!!
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:iconmc-comic:
mc-comic Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013   Digital Artist
Oh, it's so well drawn, love the water the sky, the gloss...it's amazing :la:
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:icongonpage:
gonpage Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
So cute.
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:iconjetpackx:
JetpackX Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing!
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:iconzakraart:
ZakraArt Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow!!
This is really awesome!!
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:iconthecures:
TheCures Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
i wish i was there
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:iconsoncurran:
SonCurran Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Student General Artist
This is totally beautiful. She's very pretty, I love this picture. I wish I could draw like you. :)
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:iconandrew-stealfh:
Andrew-Stealfh Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Student General Artist
I'm not saying anything, but I think I know the picture that you got inspiration. Is it a picture of an anime girl with a hat? Or I'm just getting crazy ? ^^
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:iconhaihovothan:
HaiHoVoThan Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
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Ruu...

You mean her?
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:iconyoko-tan:
Yoko-tan Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Cute, I love the overall coloring and background along with her hair, expression, pose and outfit. The water seems a little off, though :iconeweplz:
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:iconnandamona:
Nandamona Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012
the sky is awesome!
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:iconraptorthekiller:
raptorthekiller Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012   General Artist
very good and beautiful,omochikaeriiii *0*
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:iconlao235:
Lao235 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012
Thumbs up
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:iconshen17000:
Shen17000 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student Interface Designer
this is awesome
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:iconkurodiggs:
Kurodiggs Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
AUGH! MY VIRGINITY!!
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:iconkillerphoenix92:
killerphoenix92 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012  Student General Artist
Your coloring keeps improving keep it up!
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:iconenoa79:
Enoa79 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2012
Very nice. She is lovely and the sky is great.
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:iconmydarksky101:
MyDarksky101 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012
very nice art work
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:icondeadcobra:
DeadCobra Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012
Ooooh this i rely like
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:icontonycoyote:
TonyCoyote Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist
Nicely done! She looks cute! :D
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:iconnevinakuta:
NeviNakuta Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ohhh nhin ki moi thay con mat =.="
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:iconakeudi:
Akeudi Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
she is so cute!! :D
and this is amazingly done! o-o
I specially loved the way you made the clouds and her hair :)
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:iconthanatostan:
ThanatosTan Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2012  Hobbyist
the sky is really beautiful~~

also with the cute girl :love:
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:iconkawaiiotaku8:
KawaiiOtaku8 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012
it looks Awesome!
Kantoku's style is pretty hard but your getting there :D
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:iconhaihovothan:
HaiHoVoThan Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Ruu...

Thank you... =D
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:iconnaruhina2805:
naruhina2805 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012
absolutly love it
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:iconkrow000666:
krow000666 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
sweet!!
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:iconriczilla364:
Riczilla364 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012
Very amazing at the highest!
:iconspinplz:
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:iconhanahello:
hanahello Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love how you did the clouds :D
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:iconhaihovothan:
HaiHoVoThan Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Ruu...

Thanks, I put a lot of effort on those, though... =D
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TMKK961 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012  Student Artist
It's not bad. But seems like the character looks somewhat stiff and her shoulders look too straight and broad as if she's too nervous. And the water splash looks flat. Clouds need more work to do.

Also if you use SAI, also try other softwares like Adobe Photoshop and Corel Painter.
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:iconhaihovothan:
HaiHoVoThan Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Ruu...

My computer sucks so I couldn't use Photoshop, that's why I use SAI at first place.... but thank you for your concern... =D
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Cloudburst-X95 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012  Hobbyist
sao để line nước đen thế = =''
mất hết kả mĩ quan :iconheplz:
ni chug pic nềy đc :iconheplz:
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:iconhaihovothan:
HaiHoVoThan Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Ruu...

Qun đổi mu line nước... :iconmegustaplz:
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:iconnevinakuta:
NeviNakuta Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nhung ma phai noi la ong da tien bo nhiu day^^
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NeviNakuta Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
=.="
kha that vong phan may voi nuoc
nv vat thi ...lan truoc comment roy:))))))
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:iconneko-hime01:
neko-hime01 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Student Digital Artist
cute!
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:iconbelleredevance:
BelleRedevance Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ooh this is nice ^^
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:icondragon14253:
dragon14253 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012
nice picture
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:iconkeiko-chan13:
keiko-chan13 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Student Artist
I like your clouds :iconwthsparklesplz:
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:iconchristhekitty:
ChrisTheKitty Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012
Looks awesome and cute. =)
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:icongalm03:
Galm03 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
simply EPIC!!!!
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:iconaiko-hirocho:
Aiko-Hirocho Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Student General Artist
Aoi no Sora sore mo Aoi no Umi ^^ (I hope I said it right)
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:iconroyfokker93:
RoyFokker93 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012
really good
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:icongin-1994:
gin-1994 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012
phần sky my lm đẹp hơn tao rồi
nhưng nước lại khng như tao mong đợi, trong giả qu, gần giống x phng hơn, với lại lần sau vẽ nước th đừng c line
da mấy chỗ bng my lm sậm qu, với lại tc t chưa kn ka
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:iconhaihovothan:
HaiHoVoThan Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Ruu...
Nhn lại xem Kantoku vẽ nước c line ko? :iconmingplz:
Chẳng qua tao chưa đủ trnh thi...
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