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Aozora by HaiHoVoThan Aozora by HaiHoVoThan
Ruu...

Over 15 hours with Paint Tool SAI
Random OC
Try to do some BG...
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:iconkahookashii:
You're getting better and better at drawing and coloring the character especially the hair parts which show your improvement. However:
+ Eyes: keep the "black dot" in the center of the eyes, dont move it away, cuz when you go with Kantoku style, you have to do it like Kantoku did as much as you can
+Breast: too much dark tone in the left side, remove 1/2 or 2/3 it will be better
I really surprised about your first time doing BG like this, which can show your efforts to draw water, cloud and sky, not bad at all but you need to reference more to define water and cloud's color structure. And Finally, I suggest that you add some of light part on the sky to make the sun will make your pic brighter and better.
Congraz

Ruu...
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:iconepic-sauce1:
This is really good.
The shading is really good
The background is epic
The anatomy and pose are as probably as good as anyone could get.
The emotion gets a long really well with the pose.

What is bugging me is how the background stands out kind of more than the character herself. But Other than that I love it.
Also the hair is really good, and it takes a whole lot of time to be able to do this and a lot of patients, which is what makes an artist really talanted with their art.

Hope I helped,
Epic-Sauce1
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AlexSkullUterna Featured By Owner 2 hours ago
nice
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GrayComputer Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
this is awesome!
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AshiroKei Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing Clap
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studiogdm Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
cool!
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maxend1994 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Student General Artist
**) it's so cute!!
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mc-comic Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013   Digital Artist
Oh, it's so well drawn, love the water the sky, the gloss...it's amazing :la:
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gonpage Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
So cute.
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JetpackX Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing!
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Za-Akranoia Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow!!
This is really awesome!!
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TheCures Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2012
i wish i was there
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